Film Opening story

Me and Isadora have decided a few things that we can put in our film opening:

The film is mainly about a girl that has a mental problem, when she thinks she is continually seeing this man in a long black coat. Also she has illusion of seeing other people as well, sort of like she goes into another world but in her mind.

It starts off as the girl is walking home with her friends, then they depart and she walks through a park. She has one of her 'moments' where while she is walking through the park, the screen flashed to a grey scale and then there are kids playing on all of the apparatus. Then the 'moment' finishes and no one was actually there.

Then we skip to her walking into her house and going to the shower, then flash forward to when she is finished in the shower.She gets out and then in the reflection she sees a person face behind the mist of the shower glass, and opens the door and obviously no one is there.

Then we follow her into her bedroom and she picks up the phone to cal her mum, but it goes to voicemail "Mum, i think its happening again".

Then she puts her phone and in the corner of her eye, she sees the mans back outline sitting in her chair, so she switches on her lap and the figure disappears.

Thats all we've come up with at the moment, but we were also thinking of having the titles inbetween each cut.